Wednesday, October 20

because i need to brush up on subtlety.


It’s a l o n g, hopeless spell.


when colors burn into ashes.

and red fades into gray.


it’s when petals wilt.

and wither.


even when there are mornings.

and the rain.


whistles.


for it.

to blossom.


it’s devouring the poison.

and hoping.

that the monotony gives way.


to psychedelic escapes.

and momentary departures.



it’s when the insuppressible lets loose.

as it.

subsists in the empty crevices.


or the poisoned words.

and the stupor of a dreary.


existentially-angsty.

existence.


or not even.


it’s when marlboro lights.

is the only stick that sticks.


and wishing.

wishful thinking.


that as the smoke swirls in s a d and nauseating circles.

and dissipates.

ascends.


so would this dry, dry spell.


when colors burn into ashes.

and red fades into gray.


17 comments:

KikomaxXx said...

galing.. napakaemo ng pagyosi...

glentot said...

Ito ang interpretation ko sa poem mo na matagal kong pinag-isipan:

Dry spell. Tigang. Kulang sa jerjer.

claudiopoi said...

kikomax: salamat.

glentot: napaka freudian mo naman. hindi jer yan. ang tanging clue ko lang ay emo yang post na yan. :D

ahmer said...

Sponsored ng Marlboro? Hehe

redinkedvodka said...

super like!! apir! :)

claudiopoi said...

ahmer: haha. emo post lang yan dod. nahawa nako kasi sayo eh. hehehe :D

redinkedvodka: salamat naman sa pagla-like. apir back! :D

Will said...

hmm.. ma-analyze nga.. lol

claudiopoi said...

open to interpretation naman yan pareng will eh. no right or wrong answer. :D

Will said...

ah... parang Inception. :)

claudiopoi said...

kung ganun ba yung interpretation mo, eh di sige. :D

Will said...

haha, im just looking very closely at the words in boldface. lol

Nimmy said...

EMO!!!! eeeeek. hihi

claudiopoi said...

nimmy, proud to be one. :D

Yj said...

so bumagyo na at bumaha lahat lahat tigang ka pa din? nyahahahaha joke lang!

claudiopoi said...

yj,isa ka pa! if para sayo sex yan, sige lang hehe :) pero there's more to life than sex, bwahaha. :D

Ako si Yow said...

Isa lang masasabi ko.
Di ko naintindihan kahit twice ko binasa. Haha.
NOSE BLEEEEED. Haha. Pambihira!
First time here.

claudiopoi said...

yow! welcome sa blog ko. hehe. bago lang din ako sa pagbablog pero sumusubaybay nako sayo. :D heniwei, wala naman talagang definite interpretation tong post na to eh. para sa karamihan, tungkol (daw) to sa jer. pero sobrang emo lang to, haha. depression blues post lang to chong. :)